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Duke's 'Poetry'

Try as I might to disguise whatever useless excuse for writing I put on here as Poetry, I will invariably fail. But in the spirit of putting effort into at least something, here you go.




1~ One-Track Mind
These words are illusion,
Delusions - a simple space-age fusion -
The power we harness but never truly witness,
A spectral wish, a
whispered kiss -
Lying,
Our secret torment -
Their open salvation.
A broken scream in the night of life,
We mumble regrets, we
cry our pardons.
Let almighty hell be our auspicious inventor.
(Let the heavenly Might be our disgusted 'maker.)
Meet we them as our only selves -
Entrust them us with the sinful desired.
Away from all precocious manner -
We slip.






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2008-12-24 [Chimes]: *cough* Daily Poem *cough* :]

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: Hahaha XD You are a strange one, Memz-Face. This poem sucks mightily. But it wouldn't kindly exit my head.. XD So there you go. ;)

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: I like it. ^^

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: Hehe XP Well you would. XD Can't YOU put it up there, then? ;)

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: Um... I'm not sure. *goes to read the rules*

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: Haha!~~

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: Well... Lin says if I have your permission or if you request the help :P Then, yes.

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: Hahaa.. Well, you have my permission. As for help requesting, I don't understand. X_____X Perhaps I need help with that.

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: Well... some people don't know how to edit wikis XD

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: .......... Well., fair enough. :P Memz-Face.. I don't know how to edit wikis. D:

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: XD Clearly!
It is done. :P

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: :O I knowz! D:
:D Fur reelz? I sees. :) Danke.

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: Welcome. :)
You're too modest by the way... you're a good poet. ^^

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: :)
Aha! Modesty doesn't come into it. :) But thank you all the same. :P I find my 'poetry' to be rather bland, myself. XD

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: This one is so not bland! It's got all of its imagery... And the cool rhyming thing, as well as the lack of rhyming. :D Parts of it sound Shakespeare-esque. ^^

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: (I love that you can actually spell 'esque'. :P)
Ooohhh but what does it mean!? *waves arms mysteriously* :P
Hehe which parts? oO

2008-12-24 [Chimes]: (It has 'que' at the end, of course I can... you know my love of words ending in 'que'. 'Masque' for example. :P And it bugs me when certain people can't. XD)
Well... it means whatever you want it to mean. :P *meaning I can't be bothered to analyse* XD
This bit:
'Let almighty hell be our auspicious inventor.
(Let the heavenly Might be our disgusted 'maker.)
Meet we them as our only selves -
Entrust them us with the sinful desired.'

2008-12-24 [Duke Devlin]: (I definitely know what you mean. ;) You do have a certain love for those words. ;) No matter how often I correct people on that spelling, they completely ignore it. -.-)
Heh XD I wouldn't want to either. ;)
Awhh well danke. :D XD I don't quite see it, but if you think so... XP

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